Sunday, 9 June 2019
queen's birthday
on the queen's birthday I went to soyo I got a really cool ice cream it was yum when I finished I went to the moves. it was a cool move.
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hi harry. you might want to edit some things like "moves" and edit it so it will be "movies" so it makes sense. but 1 single thing nagges me the most, "I got a really cool ice cream and it was yum" edit it so then it's "yummy" instead of "yum". But will you ever play with me and sam?
ReplyDeleteHa johnny
ReplyDeletesory next time i will spell them right.